1. Pleasant speaking voice 2. I thought it was very interesting that she lived to be in her 80’s even though the life expectancy in those days was only 40 -50. 3. It was interesting to note that she lived in so many different places, and that that was unusual for that time
Weaknesses
1. Some stuttering and muttering. 2. Laughing during a formal presentation for no reason is inappropriate. 3. Extraneous comments like “I don’t know what that is.”” and asking the listener how old he or she is is inappropriate. 4. You didn’t spend much time on her role in the White House and what her passion was.
Darryl Kuchcinski
ReplyDeleteStrengths
1. Pleasant speaking voice
2. I thought it was very interesting that she lived to be in her 80’s even though the life expectancy in those days was only 40 -50.
3. It was interesting to note that she lived in so many different places, and that that was unusual for that time
Weaknesses
1. Some stuttering and muttering.
2. Laughing during a formal presentation for no reason is inappropriate.
3. Extraneous comments like “I don’t know what that is.”” and asking the listener how old he or she is is inappropriate.
4. You didn’t spend much time on her role in the White House and what her passion was.
Overall grade C 23/30